Learning Materials: ENGLISH PARAGRAPH WRITING Course


This post is intended for EFL students in Indonesia. The students are those who learn English Paragraph Writing course with me. However, other readers who come from many different parts of the world are welcome to join with our discussion within the comments of this post.

Due to the issue and real global life problem on Corona virus, including that that happens in Indonesia, I have initiative to write and publish this post. This post is a form of my efforts to give explanation to my students through digital learning. I do hope that this post not only give benefits to my students but also to people in general.

General Description

English Paragraph Writing course is an English writing course that is specifically designed to teach Paragraph writing to EFL students in Indonesia. It highlights theories and concepts on Paragraph writing that includes its elements: Topic Sentence, Supporting Sentences, Supporting Details and Concluding Sentence. In addition, this course also provides explanation on Paragraph Development that is concentrated on Five genres: Descriptive, Argumentative, Process, Cause-Effect, and Comparison-Contrast.

English Paragraph Writing course has 16 meetings. Therefore, this post presents 16 videos on each topic that should be delivered in the classroom. The videos are published in my YouTube channel: Mr. Syayid. It can be accessed and Subscribed in the following website: (https://www.youtube.com/c/Syayid). You are more than welcomed to Subscribe to the YouTube channel.

For students who take this course, you may watch and listen to my explanation in the following list of videos. There are 16 videos to watch and listen. It is your responsibility to watch and listen to each videos, so you can get the essence of my explanation as if we are in the classroom. If you have any question, please do not hesitate to ask me directly by typing your questions directly in each of the YouTube videos.

  • Video 1 (PART 1 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 2 (PART 2 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 3 (PART 3 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 4 (PART 4 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 5 (PART 5 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 6 (PART 6 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 7 (PART 7 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 8 (PART 8 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 9 (PART 9 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 10 (PART 10 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 11 (PART 11 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 12 (PART 12 – English Paragraph Writing course)
  • Video 13 (PART 13 – English Paragraph Writing course)

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  • Video 14 (PART 14 – English Paragraph Writing course)

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  • Video 15 (PART 15 – English Paragraph Writing course)

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  • Video 16 (PART 16 – English Paragraph Writing course)

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112 thoughts on “Learning Materials: ENGLISH PARAGRAPH WRITING Course

  1. Name: Ferdina
    Npm: 19040077
    Summary of vidios 1-8
    in writing a paragraph many things that must be considered when writing, we have several stages such as prewriting, drafting, revising, puplishing. There are several types of sentences that can be stated in making paragraphs. paragraphs have very important parts, namely topic sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. writing is one way to put the ideas have in mind. Before writing things to note are Determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. The steps involved in paragraph writing are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. In writing paragraph, there are paragraph structuring structures such as topic sentences, supporting sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences.
    The writing process is prewriting,drafting,revising,editing and publishing.then in parts of paragraph has three basic are the Topic sentence is main idea of paragraph,the supporting sentences is explain the Topic sentence and the concluding sentence is last sentence of a paragraph. The third subject is topicsentence is a good Topic sentence usually state an by details and examples..the next is supporting sentence, we must providing support to the topic sentence and supporting sentence are important for the quality of your academic paragraph. Then about supporting details a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea.concluding sentenve is a sentence that states a different topic sentence and is the last parts of the paragraph. Cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together and coherence is product of many different factors,which combine to make every paragraph,sentence and phrase.

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  2. Name : Etika Ningsih
    Npm : 19040054

    Summary 1

    Writing is an activity that express ideas or through about a person’s experience that can be formed in a paragraph or sentence and contains a main idea, but not all humans can write properly and correctly in writing in a writing is not difficult for humans but writing correctly we must understand the initial steps and instructions in writing correctly the steps we must do must be in accordance with the object that we have thought is pay activity, in some of the explanation in the video that are related to the formation of paragraph we must be able to pay attention to various things for example in the structure of writing academic writing in English is basically different from Indonesia. Before we write we can pay attention to teh purpose we write for who and we write for who and we can determine what theme we will write for the intended purpose and we can determine that topic and find something that we can convery or conclude.

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  3. Name:citra Febri Yanti
    Npm:190040038

    From what I Saw in the video about the video about the row course in doing paragraph writing, one of the ways for US to know where the main ideas are in the mind and contains about understanding how to write paragraph correctly and well.
    In some of the explanation in the video that are closely related to the formation of paragraph we must be able to pay attention to various things,, for example, in the structure of writing , Academic writing in English is basically different from Indonesian, but the language we use everyday, especially for Indonesian.
    Before we write we can pay attention to try purpose we write for who and we can determine what theme we Will write for the Topix and find something that we can convery or conclude. In writing , we need to have steps in writing paragraph , namely determining the Topix sentence, determining the explanatory sentence, determining the developer sentence and determining the conclusion sentence.

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  4. Summary (1-8)
    Name :Stevenika Gabriela Aurellia
    Npm:19040069

    A paragraph is a group of sentences about a single topic , together the sentence of the paragraph explain the writers main idea (most important idea ,a paragraph is often between five and Ten sentence long but it can longer or shorter ,depending on the topic the first sentence of a sentence is usually indented (moved in ) a few spaces ,a paragraph has three major structural parts,a Topix sentence ,supporting sentences and a concluding sentence ,the Topic sentence captures the main idea of a paragraph,suppoi sentence to develop the Topic sentence its contents are reason , examples,facts,statistic,and quantations and the concluding sentence ia restattemant of the Topic sentence,When writing paragraphs it must focus on just one main idea And then in paragraph must be coherence in a paragraph of coherence that is part of a variety of facts that are coherence combined into sentences and cohesion in a paragraph that is a tool that connects the writing together.

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  5. Name:Lisma Triana
    Npm:19040061
    Summary the vidio 1-8
    Academic writing in English basically different from Indonesian language academics and writing can make connections between ideas.
    A parageaph is a group of sentences about a single topic. Together,the sentences of the paragraph explain the writer main idea about the topic. A paragraph has a basic unit of organization in writing in which a group of related sentences develops one main idea.
    Three basic parts of a paragraph: The topic sentence,The supporting sentences(with supporting details),The concluding Sentence.
    The sentence that expresses the main idea of a paragraph is called the topic sentence. The topic sentence captures the main idea of a paragraph. One characteristic of a topic sentence is that it contain only one idea. The final sentence a paragraph is called the concluding sentece. A sentence that restates the main idea should give information in a slightly different way, perhaps by using different words of by using different word order.

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  6. Name:Felizia Febriani
    Npm:19040068
    Summary:
    According to everyone the ability to write is normal because it has been applied early on but the ability to write well is one of the useful skills to developed.in writing,there are things that need to be considered.namely the writing process is divided into prewriting,drafting,revising,editing,and publishing.English paragraph writing is a process of expressing an idea in written form.where part of a paragraph is a number of sentences that are interrelated and grouped into one paragraph and the paragraph is a group of sentences with one topic.The basic aim of a paragraph is to communicate an idea in a clear and effective way,it aims to discuss one aspect of the subject or topic because in fact,the cardinal rule of paragraph writing is to focus on one idea.A basic paragraph structure usually consists with the topic sentence(main idea),The supporting sentence(Supporting details),The Concluding sentence.And than,another characteristic of a paragraph is that all of the sentences relate to the main idea expressed in the first sentence.this is called unity.Next Topic is cohesion and coherence.Cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together and Coherence is the product of two factors paragraph unity and cohesion.

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  7. Name : Annisa Avprilia
    Npm : 19040070
    Class : 19’C
    Summary the video 1 – 8

    As indonesian students,we need to understand that writting academically in English is fundamentally different from writting academically in indonesia. Writting requires a creative process of thinking and learning about yourself, about other people and abour our own world.Writting a language is not can be equated with a written version of speech.Written language must be complete,both grammatically,vocabulary and also accuracy in writting.Writting learning material there are several topics,the first is the Parts of paragraph, the main concept that must be understood is that the paragraph is a group of related sentences, so in the form of several interelated sentence. Second is the Topic sentence,in English concept,topic = topic + controling idea, topic sentence is also related to paragraphs. Third is Supporting sentence,supporting sentence is used to support the Topic sentence.The fourth is Supporting details,which is the factor example that tells the reader more information about the main idea.The fifth is Concluding sentence,concluding sentence is a sentence but with different pattern.The sixth is Unity In a academic paragraph,a paragraph can be started united if the sentence develops a single idea.The next material is Cohesion and coherence in a academic paragraph. Coherence is the product part of various factors combined to make each paragraph,each sentence and each phrase contribute to the meaning of the whole piece,and cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writting together.

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  8. Name: Filza putri dhanyssa
    Npm: 19040076
    Class: 19’C

    Summary from videos meeting 1-8 English Paragraph Writing(EPW). We can learn how to write with ideas and express words with our own imagination. Writing is a tool that empowers you to participates in the ongoing dialogue among peeople in letter, newsgroups, memos, pettition, reports, article, and books. Writing also containt process of decition making, of selecting, deleting, and rearraging material. There are few things to consider before writing is determaining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, choosing a topic and analyze so people can understand. A paragraph consist of five to ten sentences that gives information about the topic, the sentences explain the writers main idea about the topic. Paragraph should be long enough to develop the main idea clearly. There are three basic parts of a paragraph is the topic sentence,supporting details, and concluding sentence. A paragraph develop single idea, each paragraph should have a topic sentences that states the main idea of the paragraph. Characteristic of a paragraph is that all of the sentences relate to the main idea expressed in the first sentences. In writing, coherence means that all ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence. The reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish to express.

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  9. Name:Reza loliya ainiati fitri
    Npm:19040071
    Class:C
    Summary of meeting 1-8
    English paragraph writing is not only like putting letters on paper but requires a process of creative thinking and intelligence in writing the language in writing.A few things you should consider before you write:determining your purpose,identifying your audience,setting your tone,analyzing your argument,choosing a topic,finding something to say.Writing must also be given attention to grammar and vocabulary so that writing will be interesting for the reader to read.In paragraph writing consists of 5-10 senyences that have 1 topic.The topic sentence is usually at the beginning and the end.A good paragraph should have a topic sentence,supporting sentence,supporting details,and concluding sentence.If all these elements ate found in a composition,then they are considered to be a paragraph of cohesion and coherence.With coherence,the reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish to express.

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    1. Name:Reza loliya ainiati fitri
      Npm:19040071
      Class:C
      Summary of meeting 1-8
      English paragraph writing is not only like putting letters on paper but requires a process of creative thinking and intelligence in writing the language in writing.A few things you should consider before you write:determining your purpose,identifying your audience,setting your tone,analyzing your argument,choosing a topic,finding something to say.Writing must also be given attention to grammar and vocabulary so that writing will be interesting for the reader to read.In paragraph writing consists of 5-10 sentences that have 1 topic.The topic sentence is usually at the beginning and the end.A good paragraph should have a topic sentence,supporting sentence,supporting details,and concluding sentence.If all these elements ate found in a composition,then they are considered to be a paragraph of cohesion and coherence.With coherence,the reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish to express.

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  10. Enggla devi aisyah putri.
    19040075.
    English education 2019 C.

    Summary 1.
    Watching the videos you share I can take in knowledge of writing. To set our writing better. We must identify portions of paragraphs, topics sentences, support sentences, support details, end sentences, unity, cohesion and coherence.In academic writing, paragraphs are often between five and ten sentences, but they can be longer or shorter, depending on the topic.

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  11. Name:Reza Loliya ainiati fitri
    Npm:19040071
    Class:C
    Summary of meeting 1-8
    Writing is one of the ability to change the world because a writing is capable of changing a person’s views.By writing we are informed of any elements included in a paragrap like the topic sentence,supporting details, and concluding sentence. In academic writing, a paragraph is often between five and ten sentence long, but it can be longer or shorter, depending on the topic. There are several step of academic writing:prewriting,drafting,revising,editing,publishing.And there several transition signals that are used in concluding:in conclusion, therefore, as expressed, overall, as a result, this, finally, lastly, for this reason, in general. For example:in conclusion, Padang students like to eat noodles when they do not go anywhere. A paragraph that is unfied is one in which all the sentences relate to and develop the topic sentence.Coherence in writing means that all the ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence. With coherence, the reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish.

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  12. Elinda wati febria
    19040051
    Assalamualaikum wr.wb.
    After l watch all video l know that writing is important.
    According to me,writting is one of way to show creativity for someone.
    But if we will write a paragraph,we should know all the rule in writting.
    This is some part to show in our paragraph there are…
    Topic in the paragraph should has one topic and than to show supporting sentence,then supporting details(fact,statistic,etc) about the topic and we should know what is the conclusion when we write a paragraph,and the paragraph can be unite all sentence with the topic and all should cohesion and coherence.
    If all rule completed it can be a good paragraph and reader can understand and enjoy with our paragraph and they can get some knowledge,or fact in our paragraph cause we have to show that before.
    And if we will write something before we should to know how to show our ideas,and it can be easy if we think writting is art in our life and we enjoy if we write.

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  13. Name: Taufik Hidayat
    Npm : 19040032
    Summary the video (1-8) about epw course

    In the introduction to the article about understanding how to write paragraphs correctly, Some things to do before writing:
    Determine your purpose: your purpose in writing
    Identify your audience :listener or people who will read
    Setting your tone ,
    Analyze your arguments :analyze opinions or arguments
    Select a topic,the topic that you want to create. Example: game.
    Find something to say things you will write
    Parts of paragraph,several interrelated sentences,Dorothy E, zermach and lisa A.rumisek states that “A paragraph is a group of five to ten sentences that give information about a topic meaning when you write a paragraph that the paragraph you write is not less than 5 also not less than 10 sentences and 5-10 sentences have information about a topic only
    •Topi sentence,Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph. Relationship topic sentence with paragraph, paragraph that develops one idea an idea is expressed in from of topic sentence. When writing A topic sentence viewers will ask this Why, How, In what ways, What does that main
    •Supporting sentence,providing support to your topic sentences,so the topic sentences need to be supported by supporting sentences, Supporting details,what is suporting details? Supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea,when you write a paragraph, supporting details are in the middle of the paragraph you are writing about. the content relates to facts or examples, which support the main idea or the topic sentences
    •Concluding sentence : including all that has been discussed,concluding sentence is closely related to the topic sentence, actually concluding sentence is a sentence that also states the topic sentence but with a different pattern, so concluding sentence is the closing part of the paragraph, without any concluding sentence, then your paragraph is stated not perfect.
    •Unity in an academic paragraph,
    when you write an academic paragraph that means that the fragment is a sentence, your sentence must have an element of unity.
    paragraphs can be expressed with the main idea, every sentence must be interrelated. When writing paragraphs it must focus on just one main idea. How to create unity in paragraphs by editing, we must focus looking at spelling, punctuation, vocabulary words and grammar that we write, and stay focused to supporting sentence from topic sentence to have unity.
    Cohesion and coherence in an academic paragraph.
    •Coherence : complicated and sequential writing
    •cohesion : the interrelation of each sentence and each paragraph

    I hope my summary not mesy again 😁

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  14. Nama : M Yogi Eka Saputra L S
    Npm : 19040065
    Course : English Paragraph Writing
    Summary :
    English Paragraph Writing is one of the skills in learning English. In writing, written language cannot be confused with speech and written language must be complete in every way. Before writing, there are 6 things to do. They are determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. Some processes in writing are also needed. Those are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. In English Paragraph Writing, there are 3 basic parts of paragraph. They are topic sentence, supporting sentence with supporting details, and concluding sentence. The first, topic sentence is the essence of what is written in the paragraph. Characteristics of the topic sentence are explaining one main idea, focusing on aspect of the topic, and expalining to the reader what the paragraph about. Then, supporting sentence is used to provide your topic sentence. There are 3 common ways to support the topic sentence. Those are using be facts/statistics, examples, and illustrations. The form of supporting sentences are reasons, examples, facts, statistics, and quotations. Next, supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea. In supporting details there are 4 rules, which must be related to the topic, stated as clearly as possible, can be accounted for, and are sufficiently written in the paragraph. After that, concluding sentence is a statement of the topic sentence. As expresed, overall, as result, thus, finally, lastly, for this reason, and in general. And in English Paragraph Writing we also recognize the unity in an academic paragraph. Unity is all of the sentences relate to the main idea expressed in the first sentence. A paragraph is unified when it’s sentences develop a single idea. And each sentence in a paragraph connects smothly before and after it. This is called coherence. Coherence is a product of many different factors, which combine to make every paragraph, sentence, and phrases. There are 6 ways to make the paragraph coherence. That ways are to combine ideas using subordination and coordination, point back to old information using this or these plus a noun, point back to old information using pronouns, use introductory prepositional phrases, repeat key words and ideas, and use connecting words. Besides coherence, there is also cohesion. It is the glue that holds a piece writing together. Cohesive devices certainly include transitional words and phrases. Overall, all of skills in English paragraph writing must be mastered in order to write properly and correctly.

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  15. Name : Nabilla Ariva Putri
    Npm : 19040066
    English Paragraph Writing

    Writing in english is different from writing in indonesian. Writing is demanding creative process of thinking and learning about your self. In writing the writer can also spend by writing the writer. In writing usually the writer will determine what topic they will write. Usually after the writer determines the topic, they will describe the topic in a few sentences. After decribing some of these topic the writer will write or add supporting sentences so that the writing written is clear. In writing written by the autor, the writer must also write a conclusion from what was written.
    from the topic that has been determined by the author, the writer must focus the explanation of the topic clearly.
    with a clear explanation, then the writing written by the writer becomes writing that can be understood. A paragraph usually beginswith a sentence that expresses the main idea. Contains point that support the main idea and examples that illustrate those points. when writing, the writer must link the explanation written with the topic written, If it is not connected between the topic and explanation, the writing will not have any meaning or conclusion. When writing, the writer also needs to pay attention to the language used when writing. The combination of languages ​​is also important when writing because it will make writing good.

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  16. Aldo Maiwando
    19040042

    As i saw on many videos and I obtained some points. Writing is a window to show our opinion to the world. Before we are going to write something, we must pay attention to many aspects of writing such us dertimining our purpose identify our audience, setting our tone choosing our topic and finding something to say before we are going to do. to arrange our writing better. We ought to know parts of paragraph, topic sentences, supporting sentences, supporting details, concluding sentence, unity, cohesion and coherence . All of them is needed

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  17. ldo Maiwando
    19040042
    As i saw on many videos and I obtained some points. Writing is a window to show our opinion to the world. Before we are going to write something, we must pay attention to many aspects of writing such us dertimining our purpose identify our audience, setting our tone choosing our topic and finding somethingto say before weare going to do. Id w want to arrnge our writing better. We ought to know parts of paragraph, topic sentences, supporting sentences, supposed details, concluding sentence, unity, cohesion and coherence . All of them is needed 😊

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    1. Alright, Aldo, I have read your writing. Few words in your writing have incorrect spelling. You may go through those words, such as ‘Id’, ‘w’, …and I guess that you do not have to use Emoticon. This is not a personal or group-based chatting.

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      1. Uhm i’m so sorry so sir, i still make some mistake. I still haven’t applied the point” identifying the purpose” i need more direction sir

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  18. Nama : M Yogi Eka Saputra L S
    Npm : 19040065
    Course : English Paragraph Writing
    Summary :
    English Paragraph Writing is one of the skills in learning English.In writing,written language cannot be confused with speech and written language must be complete in every way.Before writing,there are 6 things to do.They are determining your purpose,identifying your audience,setting your tone,analyzing your argument,choosing a topic,and finding something to say.Some processes in writing are also needed.Those are prewriting,drafting,revising,editing,and publishing.In English Paragraph Writing,there are 3 basic parts of paragraph.They are topic sentence, supporting sentence with supporting details,and concluding sentence.The first, topic sentence is the essence of what is written in the paragraph.Characteristics of the topic sentence are explaining one main idea,focusing on aspect of the topic,and expalining to the reader what the paragraph about.Then, supporting sentence is used to provide your topic sentence.There are 3 common ways to support the topic sentence.Those are using be facts/statistics,examples,and illustrations.The form of supporting sentences are reasons,examples,facts, statistics,and quotations.Next, supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea.In supporting details there are 4 rules, which must be related to the topic,stated as clearly as possible,can be accounted for,and are sufficiently written in the paragraph.After that, concluding sentence is a statement of the topic sentence.As expresed,overall,as result,thus, finally,lastly, for this reason,and in general.And in English Paragraph Writing we also recognize the unity in an academic paragraph.Unity is all of the sentences relate to the main idea expressed in the first sentence.A paragraph is unified when it’s sentences develop a single idea.And each sentence in a paragraph connects smothly before and after it.This is called coherence.Coherence is a product of many different factors,which combine to make every paragraph,sentence,and phrases.There are 6 ways to make the paragraph coherence.That ways are to combine ideas using subordination and coordination,point back to old information using this or these plus a noun,point back to old information using pronouns,use introductory prepositional phrases,repeat key words and ideas,and use connecting words.Besides coherence, there is also cohesion.It is the glue that holds a piece writing together.Cohesive devices certainly include transitional words and phrases.Overall, all of skills in English paragraph writing must be mastered in order to write properly and correctly.

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    1. Alright, Yogi. I have read your writing, but it looks to me that you forgot to edit the space between the period / stop to the capital letters between two sentences.

      For example:

      English Paragraph Writing is one of the skills in learning English.In writing, written language cannot ……

      It should be written this way:

      English Paragraph Writing is one of the skills in learning English. In writing, written language cannot ……

      You may submit it again for editting purposes. That’s alright.

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  19. Name : Mia Amanda
    Npm : 19040086
    Course: English Paragraph writing
    So the conclusion that i can find in video 1-8 is we can find ideas contained in every material in it,many things to consider when writing,and we can also learn the steps in writing and making paragraphs likes determine your goals,identify your audiance,choose a topic and find something to say,you can organizing material from notes,books,novels,and you must have creative ideas and intresting in writing a paragraph.In the process when you writing is you should pay very attention to your topic sentence,and supporting sentence is used to support the topic sentence and some suporting details to make a paragraph,in 1 paragraph you must consist 5-10 sentence in 1 topic,and when you make a paragraph don’t use your personal opinion try to put fact,example and ilustration to support the topic sentence, to become the perfect paragraphs.
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  20. NAME: ANISA FITRI
    NPM:19040039
    19B
    After I watched 1-8 videos there are some things I can conclude, namely: in spoken and written languages ​​are different. the spoken language tends to be incomplete while the writing must be complete. in writing we need to pay attention to determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. A paragraph is a part that consists of several sentences (topic sentence, supporting sentence, and closing sentence). in a paragraph we can only write one main sentence. in writing we must determine topics, opinions, and supporting sentences that are interesting so that it can arouse curiosity for the reader

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  21. Name:sri dariani
    Npm :19040085
    English paragraph writing course teach you how to write correctly. Writing is not just inking on paper but it requires creative ideas that must be developed. Three basic parts of a paragraph are topic sentence, supporting sentence, and concluding sentence. Topic sentence is the subject of discussion in a paragraph, usually at the begining or end of a paragraph and followed by supporting sentences. Then concluding sentence is a sentence at the end of a paragraph that acts to unite the information that has been presented to develop controlling ideas in the topic sentence.

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  22. Name : Mia Amanda
    Npm : 19040086
    Course: English Paragraph writing

    Summery 1
    So the conclusion that i can find in video 1-8 is we can find ideas contained in every material in it,many things to consider when writing,and we can also learn the steps in writing and making paragraphs likes determine your goals,identify your audiance,choose a topic and find something to say,you can organizing material from notes,books,novels,and you must have creative ideas and intresting in writing a paragraph.In the process when you writing is you should pay very attention to your topic sentence,and supporting sentence is used to support the topic sentence and some suporting details to make a paragraph,in 1 paragraph you must consist 5-10 sentence in 1 topic,and when you make a paragraph don’t use your personal opinion try to put fact,example and ilustration to support the topic sentence, to become the perfect paragraphs.

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  23. Name:sri dariani
    Npm :19040085
    English paragraph writing course teach you how to write correctly. Writing is not just inking on paper but it requires creative ideas that must be developed. Three basic parts of a paragraph are topic sentence, supporting sentence, and concluding sentence.

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  24. Name : Dwitri septina
    Npm : 19040074
    From videos meeting 1-8 english paragraph writing. Writing is a creative act, the act of writing is creative because its requires to interpret or make sense of something: a experience, a text, an event. The writer’s important task is to master the principle of writing and thinking. Including discovering the arrangement of styles about an object, choosing things to write with concepts and theories and determining how to write them so that the reader can understand them easily and clearly.

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  25. Bella novita
    19040049
    writing is an activity to express thoughts and feelings in written form that is expected to be understood by readers and serves as an indirect means of communication.in writing we have paragraph.paragraphs are parts that originate from a composition consisting of a number of sentence.the passage that must rest with a paragraph is the topic sentence,the the supporting sentence,and the concluding sentence. a paragraph must have a main idea. the main idea being the main problem covered by one paragraph.the topic sentence is indicating the main idea of a paragraph and can generally be found at the beginning of the paragraph.supporting sentence is one that the authors use to clarify the main sentence. with the supporting sentences,the main sentence of paragraph becomes easier to understand. The concluding sentence is a final decision that is reached at the end of the paragraph.unity in academy paragraph means that in paragraph we can only write one major sentence or primary idea.coherence is the orderly arrangement of reality and ideas, facts,and ideas into a logical strad that makes it easy to grasp the message it covers. cohesion is the uniformity of relations between one and the other elements of discourse.

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  26. Aldo Maiwando
    19040042

    As i saw on many videos and I obtained some points. Writing is a window to show our opinion to the world. efore we are going to write something, we must pay attention to many aspects of writing such us dertimining our purpose identify our audience, setting our tone choosing our topic and finding somethingto say before weare going to do. Id w want to arrnge our writing better. We ought to know parts of paragraph, topic sentences, supporting sentences, supposed details, concluding sentence, unity, cohesion and coherence . All of them is needed 😊

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  27. Yosi anggun sapitri
    19040059
    So this is the conclusion of video 1-8 from me, it can be concluded that every human being can almost be said to be able to write, but not all humans can write correctly.In general writing is not difficult for humans but writing correctly we must understand the initial steps to be able to write correctly, the steps that must be we do is determining your purpose, identifying you audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. Determining the topic is one of the important steps to start writing because of an interesting topic can make people interested in want to read our writing. Next,Topic sentence is an opinion sentence but not personal opinion, which focuses on one aspect or topic. last but not least, supporting sentences must also be interesting and easy to understand by the reader, so that the reader feels comfortable to continue reading, and the contents must not deviate from the topic because is a mistake, when writing paragraphs we have to focus with just one main idea until concluding sentence, by means of each paragraph must have a unity with other paragraphs that refer to the main idea.

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  28. A video resume from 1-8, that is, writing can be interpreted as pouring ideas or ideas with the language of writing. Writing is an activity of telling ideas or ideas with complex capabilities through priductive active activities that can be understood by others. Writing is a way to express thoughts about feelings in writing from, that is questionable, where writing is a way for us to creatively process thinking and learning about ourselves, others, and the world. Thinking requires creativity, where writing is an instrument for direct dialogue. Writing isa constant process through material selection, writing, and composition. The comprehension that can be gained in writing requires intelligence in translating a written language. And a lot of things to discuss in the paragraph, because it gets sent to the place of complaint all that can’t be opened, like expressing the feelings and ideas of life created through words. One skill, because writing is an interrelated ability to read, listen to, and develop ideas or combine. And if we write about the rules of authorship that are in the book, it will be able to create a paragraph that’s just as good.

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  29. Yosi anggun sapitri
    19040059
    So this is the conclusion of video 1-8 from me, it can be concluded that every human being can almost be said to be able to write, but not all humans can write correctly, because in writing we must understand the initial steps to be able to write correctly, the steps that must be we do is determining your purpose, identifying you audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say, determining the topic is one of the important steps to start writing because of an interesting topic can make people interested in want to read our writing, and next,Topic sentence is an opinion sentence but not personal opinion, which focuses on one aspect or topic ,as well as supporting sentences must also be interesting and easy to understand by the reader, so that the reader feels comfortable to continue reading, and the contents must not deviate from the topic because is a mistake, when writing paragraphs we have to focus with just one main idea until concluding sentence, by means of each paragraph must have a unity with other paragraphs that refer to the main idea.

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  30. Name: Gea Utari
    Npm : 19040073
    There are many points that i can conclude in many videos. First, writing is indirecly language and a tool to say something trough of letters, newsgroups, articles, etc. There are many steps in writing process ; prewriting, just imagine in our mind in this is the first step when we want to write something. Continued to drafting ;in this step we start to write some sentence then for the next steps is revising, i think this is difficult process, we must change uncorrect sentences. And editing process is used to to checking our writing. Finally after at all, publishing our writing in order to see for everybody. Second, parts of paragraph in EPW, is the writer’s main idea. It contain 5 – 10 sentences and contain three basic of paragraph there is topic sentence,supporting and concluding sentence . It could be shorter or longer.Third unity, it connected a paragraph to each other by using transition in order to related with topic sentence. Finally, cohension and coherence, connected to main idea by using connecting words such as “beside”. After connecting words, we must add coma(,) that explain of main idea in order to easy to be understood by the readers. This is my summary based i know so far and thanks for your direction sir. I hope, i more understand if we learn direcly in the class

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  31. Name : Tasya Salsabila
    NPM : 19040052
    Course : English paragraph writing

    With a video from 1-8 that is, writing is an activity to express thoughts about feelings in written from, which can be clearly questioned, where writing is a way for us to process creatively in thinking and learning about ourselves, others, and the world. Thinking requires creativity, where writing is a tool for direct dialogue. Writing is a constant process through selecting, writing, and compiling material. Understanding that can be taken that in writing, requires intelligence in translating written language. And many things that must be discussed in the paragraph, because it will be sent to the complaints place all that can not be opened, such as expressing the feelings and ideas of life created through words. One skill, because writing is an interrelated ability with the ability to read, listen, and develop ideas or combine. And if we write about the authorship rules that are in the book, then will be able to produce paragraphs well.

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    1. Your writing has indeed covered the essential materials, but the first sentence has a serious issue. Is the first sentence of your paragraph a topic sentence? You may consider editting it for a few aspects on Vocabulary.

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  32. Name : Adhil Giwana Putra
    NPM : 19040035

    Summary 1
    Writing is so important in a paragraph, good writing helps the reader understand and enjoy our paragraph. Good ideas are not enough to write a good essay, they need to be organized so that they make sense. Keeping one idea to one paragraph is the most basic rule of good paragraphing. In a paragraph we might have several pieces of supporting evidence for the one idea, we might even have several points. If we do have several points, however, they must be related to the main idea/topic of the paragraph. If these points start to get too long though, it’s probably a good idea to give each point its paragraph to discuss it further. A paragraph develops one main idea through a series of related sentences. This main idea is usually introduced in the first sentence of the paragraph, called the topic sentence. The idea is then developed further through the sentences that follow. A paragraph is usually around 250 words and consists of five or six sentences, although this can vary depending on the purpose of the paragraph, and the length of the piece you are writing. Paragraphs play an important role in writing because they provide a framework for organizing your ideas in a logical order. Using a clear structure for your paragraphs helps guide the reader through your written work. A useful way of understanding paragraph structure is to think of it as a block that is divided into three sections, topic sentence (the beginning), supporting sentences (the middle), and concluding sentence (the end). A topic sentence is the most important sentence in a paragraph because it contains the main idea of the paragraph. A good topic sentence usually contains an opinion that will be proved or supported in a paragraph. Supporting sentences develop the topic sentence, it contains reasons, examples, facts, statistics, and quotations. Supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea. The final sentence in a paragraph is called the concluding sentence, it sums up the main points or restates the main idea in a different way. Unity in an academic paragraph is we discuss only one main idea in a paragraph. The main idea is stated in the topic sentence, and then each supporting sentence develops that idea. Finally, each sentence in a paragraph connects smoothly before and after it, this is called coherence. With coherence, the reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish to express. After coherence, there is cohesion which is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it sticks together from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph.

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  33. Name: intan tria ananda
    Clas english 19 C
    Course: english writing paragraph summary 1-8 Epw
    Writing is a work that result in thingking with the breaclth of the mindset of you or others. In starting to write we must pay attention to the topic and analyze it carefully so that it can be understood by many people. Write many paragraph that we understand from the paragraph that is the parts from the paragraph of the main ideas and relevant to the article or essay as a whole, the topic sentence must be adjusted to the main idea which is equipped supporting details, supporting sentence, concluding sentence. Unity is all sentence related to the topic of the sentence editing and has simple sentence. Cohesion and Coherence are the glue that joins pieces of writing pieces from sentence to sentences and from paragraph to paragraph. The coherence in writing means that all ideas in the paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence and the next each sentence and each phrase contribute to the meaning of the whole section.

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  34. Name : Azizah Hidayat Putri
    Npm : 190063
    Course: English Paragraph Writing

    conclusions from the English Paragraph Writing (EPW) video 1-8, we can introduction to the English Paragraph Writing (EPW) course can enable us to find ideas contained in every material in it. Then the process is directly selecting, searching for, and compiling ideas for materials in the form of notes, books, novels, or reports, and we can understand each of the ideas of lesson material that has been submitted.

    The steps in writing are pre-writing, compiling, reviewing, and other revisions, as well as rewriting the parts that must be in the paragraph. The topic sentence is located at the beginning of the paragraph. Supporting sentences are sentences that develop ideas expressed with paragraph topic sentences. Supporting details must be related to the topic sentence and need to be explained in detail. The closing sentence is the last sentence called the conclusion.

    And writing is one way to put the ideas have in mind.
    Not only that coherence and cohesion must also be considered in writing a paragraph, what is meant is the integration of meaningful relationships between the parts in the discourse, while cohesion refers to the way we link or bind each part of the paragraph.

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  35. Name:Wike Yulianda
    Npm:19040082
    From videos meeting 1 to 8, i’m going to try to conclude about those material of wrting.
    English Paragraph Writing
    In the first to eight material about paragraph writing, there are many things to consider when writing, we have several stages such as pre-writing, compilation, revision, writing.The part of academic paragraph writing are; pre-writing, drafting, reviewing and revising, rewriting.
    There are types of sentence; simple sentence, compound sentence and complex sentence.Paragraphs must have unity, that is, a paragraph must be built with one clear mind, the relationship of one mind to another thought will indicate that the paragraph has unity.understand the writing. In the process of the writing you should pay attention to the topic sentence means words phrase or a combination of some words (no subject or predicat). Ussually topic sentence in the form of opinion and not fact.Supporting sentence used to support topic sentence one of which uses facts or statistical information, can be used in from of examples and illustration.Part of the paragraph, the topic sentence is an opinion sentence but not personal opinion, which focuses on one aspect or topic.

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  36. Elsyifa salsabila
    Npm : 19040055

    Well the conclusion that I got from the video that I watched was writing paragraphs, especially we must be able to use the word Microsoft Word and after that we must be able to edit the paragraphs that we make, each paragraph that we make must be long so that we can develop the main idea of ​​the paragraph. an important part of a paragraph is a supporting sentence and when we write a paragraph there is a topic sentence without a supporting sentence then your paragraph is declared not a failure, we must also pay attention to every sentence we make so that it is easily understood by the reader. remember in writing paragraphs we must focus on one aspect or topic.

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  37. Tasya Salsabila
    NPM : 19040052

    With a video from 1-8 that is, writing is an activity to express thoughts about feelings in written from, which can be clearly questioned, where writing is a way for us to process creatively in thinking and learning about ourselves, others, and the world.
    Thinking requires creativity, where writing is a tool for direct dialogue. Writing is a constant process through selecting, writing, and compiling material. Understanding that can be taken that in writing, requires intelligence in translating written language.
    And many things that must be discussed in the paragraph, because it will be sent to the complaints place all that can not be opened, such as expressing the feelings and ideas of life created through words. One skill, because writing is an interrelated ability with the ability to read, listen, and develop ideas or combine. And if we write about the authorship rules that are in the book, then will be able to produce paragraphs well.

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    1. Dear Tasya, I have read your writing for Summary 1. However, the writing has more than one paragraph. For task purpose, I think that it should be fine for you if you could edit it the layout for next assignment: Summary 2.

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  38. Name : Efani Safira
    Npm : 19040044
    Subject : English Paragraph
    Writing.
    Summary the video 1-8
    If you want to write something, you must have creative ideas and interesting in writing. In writing you have to pay attention to the parts-the important part of the writing. The post is properly and concepted well the reader is easy to understand the writing. In the process of the writing you should pay attention to the topic sentence means words phrase or a combination of some words (no subject or predicat). Ussually topic sentence in the form of opinion and not fact. Supporting sentence means sentence that aims to clarify the topic sentence, ussually form of fact. Supporting details means explains in detail paragraph and giving examples and evidence of facts. Concluding sentence is a summary of the whole paragraph and an important point in a writing. Unity in paragraph means the paragraph focus only single idea. Coherence is ideas are connected of appropriate transition signals. The last cohesion means devices of connecting sentences to each other.

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    1. Name:Reza Loliya ainiati fitri
      Npm:19040071
      Class:C
      Summary of meeting 1-8
      Writing is one of the ability to change the world because a writing is capable of changing a person’s views.By writing we are informed of any elements included in a paragrap like the topic sentence,supporting details, and concluding sentence. In academic writing, a paragraph is often between five and ten sentence long, but it can be longer or shorter, depending on the topic. There are several step of academic writing:prewriting,drafting,revising,editing,publishing.And there several transition signals that are used in concluding:in conclusion, therefore, as expressed, overall, as a result, this, finally, lastly, for this reason, in general. For example:in conclusion, Padang students like to eat noodles when they do not go anywhere. A paragraph that is unfied is one in which all the sentences relate to and develop the topic sentence.Coherence in writing means that all the ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence. With coherence, the reader has an easy time understanding the ideas that you wish.

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  39. Name : CHINTYA HOKMI NELVIA
    Npm : 19040060

    Writen language is complate in way, in grammar and other. In the introduction to the article about understanding how to write paragraphs correctly, Some things to do before writing:
    Determine your purpose (your purpose to writing),Identify your audience (the reader),Set your tone (Tone or sound),Analyze your arguments,(analyze opinions or arguments),Select a topic (the topic that you want to create. Example: school life).Find something to say (things you will write on the paragraph). The paragraph has main structural, topic sentence is sentence that explains the main idea paragraph.Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph, relationship topic sentence with paragraph. When writing a topic sentence viewers will ask this (why, how, in what ways, what does that main). than Supporting sentence used to support topic sentence one of which uses facts or statistical information, can be used in from of examples and illustration. Topic sentence has thinking of outhor then supporting details when writing supporting details in the middle and contains the facts. Supporting details have the concept of facts and opinions. Cohesion and coherence in An academic paragraph. Chohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. Cohasive Devi es certainly include transitional words and pharases, such as therefore, furthermore, or for instance. the coherence in writing means that all the ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence.

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  40. Name:Mudia roza
    Npm :19040064
    Conclusion from EPW 1-8 video In book writing 1 we can learn in writing we need creativity in thinking or learning, it can be about ourselves or others. Writing can also channel our opinions or opinions. In book writing 1 we can also learn the steps in writing and making paragraphs. Before writing we must pay attention to several things such as, determine your goals, identify your audiance, choose a topic, and find something to say. Paragraphs consist of interrelated sentences. One paragraph consists of 5-10 sentences that have 1 topic. In making paragraphs only discuss or only focus on one topic. besides that we must pay attention to the topic of sentences, supporting sentences and conclusions in order to make a good and correct paragraph.

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  41. NAMA : ILHAM DEWA KUSUMA
    NPM :19040041

    English paragraph writing is a writing course that can be learned with theory and specific parts to be understood as: Introduction to english paragraph writing course (The students were able to provide an explanation about writing with english and it’s application in the world of academic).Parts of a paragraph (a paragraph explain a group of sentences about a single topic and main idea most important idea and a paragraph is group of sentences to develop a main idea).Topic sentences (the most important part of paragraph).Supporting sentences (is used as a support of s topic sentences, in order to give a clear understanding).Supporting details (The supplementary information that can be added to a paragraph that is laid in the middle of paragraph, supporting details that contain a fact of fact and an example.Concluding sentences (the conclusion of the argument).Unity in an academic paragraph (explain more specifically to a unity and conclusion).Cohension and coherence in an academic paragraph (combined sentences into a comprehensive interreleated arrangement).

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  42. Name: Meisya Sukmaranim
    Npm: 19040037

    From videos meeting 1 to 8, i’m going to try to conclude about those material of wrting. As we all know, writing is creative process of our thinking. The are some things should we know before writing a paragraph, such as determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. There are also processes of writing, such as prewriting, drafting, revising, editing and publishing. Then we should understand about parts of paragraph (main idea,supporting sentence and conclusion). In a paragraph,we find the topic sentence which a sentence that state main idea in the begin or end of paragraph. Dont forget to write simple statement and dont use personal opinion in topic sentence of paragraph. Well, we should relate all of sentences that we called unity. And then each sentences in our paragraph should connects in the begin til end of paragraph, this is we called coherence. Right, if we following rules of writing in the book,we can writing well.

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    1. Your writing has construction. You should try to avoid using many construction in your writing. Besides, you should also avoid using the word ‘I’. It may sound a bit less academic.

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  43. Name : Intan Tria Ananda
    Clas 19 english C
    Npm 19040080
    Conclusion from video 1-8 Epw
    Introduction to writing contains only the ideas of the original text,part of a paragraph and main idea uncles it is not relevant to the article or essay as a whole,topik sentence is view of the writers main ideas from the following paragraph or indirectly
    Related to the thesis,Supporting details fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea,Supporting sentence function to develop the topic sentence,concluding sentence in conclusion the refore this finally,lastly,in general,overall,Unity and academic paragraph a summary paragraph usualy begins with a sentence express the main ide,topic Cohesion and Coherence is the glue that holds a piece of writing together,coherence in writing means that all the ideas a paragraph next sentence.

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  44. Name : Ririn Denisha Amanda
    NPM : 19040058
    Course: English Writing Paragraph
    Summary 1-8 English Paragraph Writing, Writing is an art, in writing we must also pay attention to word patterns so that our writing can become a valuable art. Writing paragraphs many things we must pay attention to in writing a paragraph, for example we must pay attention to how we making a good introductory paragraph we must pay attention to the arrangement of the word for word so as to produce a paragraph that is good and easily understood by the reader. In writing the paragraph also allows us to find ideas, about many things, and the direct process of selecting, deleting, and organizing material in the form notes, books, novels, and reports. Part of the paragraph, the topic sentence is an opinion sentence but not personal opinion, which focuses on one aspect or topic.

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  45. Name : Annisa
    Npm : 19040034

    Conclusion from EPW 1-8 video
    The introduction of the epw course allows us to find ideas, about many things, and the direct process of choosing, erasing and arranging matter in the form of notes, books, novels, and reports. The part of paragraph,topic sentence is a sentence of opinion but not a personal opinion, one that focuses on one aspect or topic. Supporting sentence in the form of facts, statistics, illustrations and examples to support the sentence topic.Supporting details describe details and examples from a trusted source.Concluding sentence,the concluding sentence summary of a paragraph and important to remember.Unity in the academic paragraph,each sentence defines a single topic in the united sentence.Cohesion and coherence,cohesion the relationship between each sentence and each paragraph. Coherence,write in sequence and complex.

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  46. Nama : Rahmi Nofianus Pemiba
    NPM : 19040057

    From videos 1 to 8, I have a conclusion that is, written language has a difference with spoken language. written language pays more attention to grammar, vocabulary, and to the fore in writing, while spoken does not. usually paragraphs contain 5 to 10 interrelated sentences. before writing we must pay attention to several things such as : determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. In writing we also pay attention to steps such as : topic of sentence, supporting sentence, and cloncluding sentence. paragraphs must have a united paragraph that can be expressed with the main idea, when writing the paragraph must focus on one main idea and each sentence must be related to one another. not only is coherence and cohesion also considered in writing, coherence is the integration of meaningful relationships between parts of the discourse, while cohesion refers to the way we connect or bind each part of the paragraph

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  47. Name: sherlina heviche
    Npm: 19040056
    Summary of vidios 1-8

    In writing a paragraph many things that must be considered. When writing we have several stages such as prewriting, drafting, revising, puplishing. There are several types of sentences that can be stated in making paragraphs. Paragraphs have very important parts, namely topic sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. Topic sentence is the main sentence in a paragraph, that contains an opinion and can be developed into several sentences. Supporting details are sentences that support topic sentences and are facts. Supporting details consist of a few sentences of facts. So that, readers believe what is said. While the concluding sentence is the concluding sentence of all sentences discussed and must be discussed with the topic sentence. In writing a paragraph, each sentence must be interconnected and we must use the correct transition in connecting sentences to one another. So that, readers easily understand what has been read. Therefore, in writing paragraphs we must pay attention to many things to become perfect paragraphs.

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  48. Name: sherlina heviche
    Npm: 19040056
    Summary of vidios 1-8

    In writing a paragraph many things that must be considered. When writing we have several stages such as prewriting, drafting, revising, puplishing. There are several types of sentences that can be stated in making paragraphs. Paragraphs have very important parts, namely topic sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. Topic sentence is the main sentence in a paragraph, that contains an opinion and can be developed into several sentences. Supporting details are sentences that support topic sentences and are facts. Supporting details consist of a few sentences of facts. So that, readers believe what is said. While the concluding sentence is the concluding sentence of all sentences discussed and must be discussed with the topic sentence. In writing a paragraph, each sentence must be interconnected and we must use the correct transition in connecting sentences to one another. So that, readers easily understand what has been read.Therefore, in writing paragraphs we must pay attention to many things to become perfect paragraphs.

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  49. Name : Derya Puspita Sari
    Npm : 19040053
    Course : English Paragraph Writing
    In the first to eight material about paragraph writing, there are many things to consider when writing, we have several stages such as pre-writing, compilation, revision, writing. There are several types of sentences that can be stated in making paragraphs. paragraphs have very important parts, namely topic sentences, supporting details, and closing sentences. To make paragraphs, we must also pay attention to the vocabulary that actually makes the correct sentence and we must make the coherence of the vocabulary so that it is connected in the paragraph, coherence is a product of various factors, which are combined to make each paragraph, each sentence and each phrases, contribute to the overall meaning of the work, cohesion is the glue that holds it together. In other words, if a paper is cohesive, it combines from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph. So that it becomes a coherent paragraph and is understood definitively

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  50. Name : Dela Puspita
    Npm : 19040050
    Writing is activity to improve and put your grammerly and word with correctly. writing need a telent to write. you must do like this before write a paragraph ,Determining your purpose,Identifying audience,set the tone,Analyzing your assignment, choosing a topic ,finding something to say.Process to writing Prewriting ( time to think what will you write) Drafting (time to write down what do you think)Revising ( time to improve the writing) Editing ( time to edit the writing correctly) publishing ( Time to share the writing). Paragraph have 3 stucture,topic sentence is first sentence of paragraph , topic sentence express the main idea ,sometime topic sentence can be in the begining or in the end of paragraph. topic sentence usually following by controling idea. Supporting Sentence ( with supporting details) ,Supporting sentence use to support topic sentence. supporting sentence is a fact. and supporting details related with topic sentence . supporting details explain with correctly vocabullary.three common ways to develop a paragraph.Giving details, Giving an explanation,Giving an example.concluding sentence is the last part of paragraph .usually in the end of paragraph .concluding sentence is summary of main idea and supporting detils in diffrent way. concluding sentence use transition signal in conclusion therefore as expressed, overall, as result etc.Unity is the point who that support main idea example that ilustrated those point.in a paragraph is that all of paragraph of the sentence relate to main idea expressed of first sentence.Transition is word use to between every sentence and make it enough to look clear.Editing is a process if you edit you must check the spelling , capitalization , punctuation , vocab and grammer are correct.Coherence is product of many different factors which combine to make every paragraph cintribute to the meaning of the whole piece.coherence can combine ideas using suboardination and coordination and the another way Cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. in other word if a paper is cohesive it stick together from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph.cohesive devices certainly include transitional word and phrases such as therfore futhermore or for instance.

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  51. Nama : Dinda Kamalia Zahira
    Npm : 19040048
    Course : English paragraph writing
    In writing paragraph many things we must do when we make it, first steps is introduction to writing ,The writing proces is prewriting,drafting,revising,editing and publishing.then in parts of paragraph has three basic are the Topic sentence is main idea of paragraph,the supporting sentences is explain the topic sentence and the concluding sentence is last sentence of a paragraph. The third subject is topic sentence is a good Topic sentence usually state an by details and examples..the next is supporting sentence , we must providing support to the topic sentence and supporting sentence are important for the quality of your academic paragraph. Then about supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea.concluding sentence is a sentence that states a different topic sentence and is the last parts of the paragraph.next unity in an academic paragraph have to thinking about unity when write a paragraph can be easily Torn apart into pieces. The last topic is cohesion and a coherence on an academic paragraph, cohesionis the glue that holds a piece of writing together and coherence is product of many different factors,which combine to make every paragraph,sentence and phrase.

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  52. Name: Rina Alma’in
    Npm: 19040036

    In meeting one until eight we can find several conclusions. In writing we mist determine the main idea. Steps in writing aming others pre-writing, drafting,reviewing and revising, and rewritting. The part that must be in the paragraph. The topic sentence is located at the beginning of the paragraph. Supporting sentence is a sentence that develops an idea expresed with the topic sentence of paragraph. Supporting details must be related to the topic sentence and need to explained in details. A concluding sentence is last sentence called conclusion. Unity is another characteristic of a paragraph is that all of the sentence. Then coherence is each sentence in paragraph connects smothy before and after it. Coherence is writing means all the discussions in the paragraph discuss with this sentence and next sentence. Cohesion consissts of lingking words, personal pronouns, definite articles, demonstrative pronouns, and synonyms.

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  53. Nama : Dinda Kamalia Zahira
    Npm : 19040048
    Course : English paragraph writing

    In writing paragraph many things we must do when we make it, first steps is INTRODUCTION TO WRITING ,The writing process is prewriting,drafting,revising,editing and publishing.then in PARTS OF PARAGRAPH has three basic are the Topic sentence is main idea of paragraph,the supporting sentences is explain the Topic sentence and the concluding sentence is last sentence of a paragraph. The third subject is TOPIC SENTENCE is a good Topic sentence usually state an by details and examples..the next is SUPPORTING SENTENCE , we must providing support to the topic sentence and supporting sentence are important for the quality of your academic paragraph. Then about SUPPORTING DETAILS ia a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea.CONCLUDING SENTENCE is a sentence that states a different topic sentence and is the last parts of the paragraph.next UNITY IN AN ACADEMIC PARAGRAPH have to thinking about unity when write a paragraph can be easily Torn apart into pieces. The last topic is COHESION AND ACOHERENCE IN AN ACADEMIC PARAGRAPH, COHESION is the glue that holds a piece of writing together and COHERENCE is product of many different factors,which combine to make every paragraph,sentence and phrase.

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  54. Name: Violina
    NPM : 19040062
    Course: English Paragraph Writing
    Summary of 1-8 video:

    Writing is a creative process thingking and learning about yourself, about others and about your world. Writing is also a constant process of decision making of selecting, deleting and rearranging material. Before we’ll write. We should have determining your purpose, identifying your audience, sering your tone, analyzing your assigment, Choppin g a topic and finding something to say.
    The part of academic paragraph writing are; pre-writing, drafting, reviewing and revising, rewriting.
    There are types of sentence; simple sentence, compound sentence and complex sentence.
    Part of paragraph
    A paragraph is a group of sentences about a single topic, base on explain the writer’s main idea. There are three parts of paragraph; the topic sentence, the supporting sentence (supporting details), the concluding.
    Unity in an academic paragraph. Its mean that, a paragraph is unified when its sentences develop a single idea.
    Cohesion and coherence in An academic paragraph. Chohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. Cohasive Devi es certainly include transitional words and pharases, such as therefore, furthermore, or for instance. the coherence in writing means that all the ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence.

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  55. I have approved your writing, Afizah. However, you should revise the typography of you writing. Check the Capitalization, Mechanics, and Conclusion. Can you see my writing in this comment? Look at the way how I typed it. Look at the capital letters, spellings, and mechanics (comma, stop sign).

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  56. Wan afizah
    Npm:19040047
    Summary the vidio (1-8)
    paragraphs must be built with clear thinking, paragraphs have a very important part of the topic supporting sentence detail, and closing sentences topic sentence is the main sentence in the paragraph that contains opinions and can be developed into several sentences, each sentence defines one topic in the sentence that is put together cohesion and coherence, the relationship between each sentence and each paragraph of coherence, writing is closely related to the formation of paragraphs and in writing must also pay attention to the writing structure while cohesion refers to the way we connect or lure things, we can choose ideas, in the form of notes, novels , and report

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    1. I have approved your writing, Afizah. However, you should revise the typography of you writing. Check the Capitalization, Mechanics, and Conclusion. Can you see my writing in this comment? Look at the way how I typed it. Look at the capital letters, spellings, and mechanics (comma, stop sign).

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  57. Academic writing in English basically different from Indonesian language academics, writing can make connections between ideas, writing requires creative thinking and learning process and writing can make us participate in various things. There several things to do before writing is Determining your purpose, Identifying your audience, Setting your tone, Analyzing your argument, Choosing A topic, and Finding something to say. in writing there are processes and types of sentences, and it is very important in making a writing, and the processes is Prewritting, Drafting, Revising, Editing, Publishing, and the types of sentences is Simple sentence, Compound sentence, Complex sentence, Compound-Complex sentence. A paragraph is several sentences that are interrelated and grouped into paragraph, a paragraph consists of 5-10 paragraph that have one topic, a paragraph is often written 5-10 paragraph but longer or can be shorter depending on the topic paragraph has 3 main structural parts and this is topic sentences, supporting sentences, concluding sentences. Topic sentence that explains the main idea paragraph. Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph, Supporting sentence used to support topic sentence, one of which uses facts or statistical information, can be used in from of examples and illustration, Concluding sentences we can use the following vocabulary (In conclusion therefore, as expressed, overall, as a result, finally, lastly, for this reason, in general). after that, The paragraph must be coherence in a paragraph of coherence. that is part of a variety of facts that are coherence combined into sentences and cohesion in a paragraph. that is a tool that connects the writing together

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  58. Name: trivira azizah
    Npm: 19040046

    Summary the video [1-8] about epw course
    From videos one through eight can I conclude that written language cannot be compared to written version in some cases oral language incomplete and written Language must be complete. Academic writing in English basically different from Indonesian language academics and writing can make connections between ideas.Writing requires creative thinking and learning process and writing can make us participate in various things.A paragraph is several sentences that are interrelated and grouped into paragraph, a paragraph is often written 5/10 paragraph but longer or can be shorter.The paragraph has main structural The firstly, topic sentence is sentence that explains the main idea paragraph.Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph, relationship topic sentence with paragraph. When writing a topic sentence viewers will ask this (why, how, in what ways, what does that main)The secondly Supporting sentence used to support topic sentence one of which uses facts or statistical information, can be used in from of examples and illustration. Topic sentence has attitude from the author.The thirdly,supporting details when writing supporting details in the middle and contains the facts. Supporting details have the concept of facts and opinions, supporting details are divided into two forms Major and Minor After that concluding sentence, when writing the concluding sentence should explain clearly and in detail, the concluding sentence is closely related to the topic sentence, without a concluding sentences then a paragraph has not been declared perfect. The function of the concluding sentence is summarizing or restating in a different way, giving a signal that our paragraph ends. And the paragraph must have unity paragraphs can be expressed with the main idea. When writing paragraphs it must focus on just one main idea And then in paragraph must be coherence in a paragraph of coherence that is part of a variety of facts that are coherence combined into sentences and cohesion in a paragraph that is a tool that connects the writing together.

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  59. Name: IRFIANDA YOPIGUSTRI
    NPM: 19040040
    Courses: English Paragraph Writing

    writing is one way to put the ideas have in mind. writing is closely related to the formation of a paragraph, and in the writing of paragraph must also consider the structure of the writing. Before writing things to note are Determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. The steps involved in paragraph writing are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. In writing paragraph, there are paragraph structuring structures such as topic sentences, supporting sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. Paragraphs must have unity, that is, a paragraph must be built with one clear mind, the relationship of one mind to another thought will indicate that the paragraph has unity. Not only that coherence and cohesion must also be considered in writing a paragraph, what is meant is the integration of meaningful relationships between the parts in the discourse, while cohesion refers to the way we link or bind each part of the paragraph.

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  60. writing is one way to put the ideas have in mind. writing is closely related to the formation of a paragraph, and in the writing of paragraph must also consider the structure of the writing. Before writing things to note are Determining your purpose, identifying your audience, setting your tone, analyzing your argument, choosing a topic, and finding something to say. The steps involved in paragraph writing are prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. In writing paragraph, there are paragraph structuring structures such as topic sentences, supporting sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. Paragraphs must have unity, that is, a paragraph must be built with one clear mind, the relationship of one mind to another thought will indicate that the paragraph has unity. Not only that coherence and cohesion must also be considered in writing a paragraph, what is meant is the integration of meaningful relationships between the parts in the discourse, while cohesion refers to the way we link or bind each part of the paragraph.

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  61. Name : TAUFIK HIDAYAT
    Npm : 19040032
    Summary the video (1-8)
    In the introduction to the article about understanding how to write paragraphs correctly, Some things to do before writing:
    Determine your purpose (your purpose in writing)
    Identify your audience (listener or people who will read)
    Set your tone (Tone or sound)
    Analyze your arguments (analyze opinions or arguments)
    Select a topic (the topic that you want to create. Example: game)
    Find something to say (things you will write)
    ”Parts of paragraph”(several interrelated sentences) Dorothy E, zermach and lisa A.rumisek states that “A paragraph is a group of five to ten sentences that give information about a topic (meaning when you write a paragraph that the paragraph you write is not less than 5 also not less than 10 sentences and 5-10 sentences have information about a topic only
    ”Topi sentence”,Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph. Relationship topic sentence with paragraph, paragraph that develops one idea an idea is expressed in from of topic sentence. When writing A topic sentence viewers will ask this (Why, How, In what ways, What does that main)
    ”Supporting sentence(providing support to your topic sentences),so the topic sentences need to be supported by supporting sentences
    “Supporting details(what is suporting details? Supporting details is a fact or example that tells the reader more information about the main idea,(when you write a paragraph, supporting details are in the middle of the paragraph you are writing about. the content relates to facts or examples, which support the main idea or the topic sentences)
    ”Concluding sentence (including all that has been discussed) concluding sentence is closely related to the topic sentence, actually concluding sentence is a sentence that also states the topic sentence but with a different pattern, so concluding sentence is the closing part of the paragraph, without any concluding sentence, then your paragraph is stated not perfect.
    ”Unity in an academic paragraph”
    when you write an academic paragraph that means that the fragment is a sentence, your sentence must have an element of unity.
    paragraphs can be expressed with the main idea, every sentence must be interrelated. When writing paragraphs it must focus on just one main idea. How to create unity in paragraphs by editing, we must focus looking at spelling, punctuation, vocabulary words and grammar that we write, and stay focused to supporting sentence from topic sentence to have unity.
    “Cohesion and coherence in an academic paragraph”
    •Coherence is product of many different factors,which combine to make every paragraph, every sentences and every phrase,contribute to the meaning of the whole piece
    •cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together.in other words,if a paper is cohesive,it sticks together from sentence to sentence and from paragraph to paragraph.

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  62. Name: sherlina heviche
    Npm: 19040056
    Summary of vidios 1-8

    in writing a paragraph many things that must be considered when writing, we have several stages such as prewriting, drafting, revising, puplishing. There are several types of sentences that can be stated in making paragraphs. paragraphs have very important parts, namely topic sentences, supporting details, and concluding sentences. Topic sentence is the main sentence in a paragraph that contains an opinion and can be developed into several sentences. Supporting details are sentences that support topic sentences and are facts. supporting details consist of a few sentences of facts so that readers believe what is said. While the concluding sentence is the concluding sentence of all sentences discussed and must be discussed with the topic sentence. in writing a paragraph each sentence must be interconnected, and we must use the correct transition in connecting sentences to one another. so that readers easily understand what has been read.

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    1. I have approved your writing. However, you should revise the typography of you writing. Check the Capitalization, Mechanics, and Conclusion. Can you see my writing in this comment? Look at the way how I typed it. Look at the capital letters, spellings, and mechanics (comma, stop sign).

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  63. Name: trivira azizah
    Npm: 19040046
    Summary the video [1-8] about epw course

    From videos one through eight can I conclude that written language cannot be compared to written version in some cases oral language incomplete and written Language must be complete. Academic writing in English basically different from Indonesian language academics and writing can make connections between ideas. Writing requires creative thinking and learning process and writing can make us participate in various things. A paragraph is several sentences that are interrelated and grouped into paragraph, a paragraph is often written 5/10 paragraph but longer or can be shorter. The parts of paragraph.

    A.TOPIC SENTENCE is sentence that explains the main idea paragraph. Topic sentence only has one idea, the sentence must complete what is discussed in the paragraph, relationship topic sentence with paragraph. When writing a topic sentence viewers will ask this (why, how, in what ways, what does that main)

    B.SUPPORTING SENTENCE used to support topic sentence, one of which uses facts or statistical information, can be used in from of examples and illustration. Topic sentence has attitude from the author.

    C.SUPPORTING DETAILS when writing supporting details in the middle and contains the facts. Supporting details have the concept of facts and opinions, supporting details are divided into two forms Major and Minor.

    D.CONCLUDINNG SENTENCES when writing the concluding sentence should explain clearly and in detail, the concluding sentence is closely related to the topic sentence, without a concluding sentences then a paragraph has not been declared perfect. The function of the concluding sentence is summarizing or restating in a different way, giving a signal that our paragraph ends. And the paragraph must have unity paragraphs can be expressed with the main idea. When writing paragraphs it must focus on just one main idea And then in paragraph must be coherence in a paragraph of coherence that is part of a variety of facts that are coherence combined into sentences and cohesion in a paragraph that is a tool that connects the writing together.

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  64. conclusions of the EPW video 1-8
    1.Introduction to EPW course
    Allows us to find ideas, about many things, and the direct process of selecting, deleting and compiling material in the form of notes, books, novels, and reports.
    2. Parts of paragraph
    > a paragraph consists of 5-10 sentences and can be longer depending on the topic, following parts: a.topic sentence> sentence in the form of opinion but not personal opinion, which focuses on one aspect or topic, b.supporting sentences> in the form of facts, statistics, illustrations and examples to support the topic sentence, c.supporting details> explain details and examples from reliable sources, d.concluding sentences> closing sentences, summaries of paragraphs and important to remember, e.unity in a academic paragraph> each sentence explains one the topic in the unity of the sentence, f. cohesion and coherence> cohesion: the interrelation of each sentence and each paragraph. coherence: complicated and sequential writing.

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    1. Conclusion from epw 1-8 video
      The introduction of the epw course allows us to find ideas, about many things, and the direct process of choosing, erasing and arranging matter in the form of notes, books, novels, and reports. The part of paragraph,topic sentence is a sentence of opinion but not a personal opinion, one that focuses on one aspect or topic. Supporting sentence in the form of facts, statistics, illustrations and examples to support the sentence topic.Supporting details describe details and examples from a trusted source.Concluding sentence,the concluding sentence summary of a paragraph and important to remember.Unity in the academic paragraph,each sentence defines a single topic in the united sentence.Cohesion and coherence,cohesion the relationship between each sentence and each paragraph. Coherence,write in sequence and complex.

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  65. Academic writing in english about discover ideas, make connections and see from new prespectives. Writing is also a constant process of decition making of selecting, Deleting, and rearranging material. There are three basic Parts of paragraph: The topic sentence, the supporting sentence, the concluding sentence. Unity in an academic paragraph is unified when its sentences develop a single idea. Each paragraph should have a topic sentence that states the main idea of paragraph. Clear topic sentence help readers follow discussion and enable you to make sure that your paragraphs are unified. Cohesion and coherence in academic paragraph. Cohesion is the glue that holds a piece of writing together. Cohesion certainly include transitional Woods and phrases, such as therefore, furthemore, or for instance. Coheren is writing means that all the ideas in a paragraph flow smoothly from one sentence to the next sentence.

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